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Aug 06, 2018ApollosRaven rated this title 1.5 out of 5 stars
It seemed to me that the author tried to stuff too large a cast, too many travel destinations, and too complex a plot into too few pages. The main character is poorly presented. During moments of crisis she again and again freezes, and is intimidated. Yet other characters repeatedly over-praise her, and the author keeps finding ways to tell us that she's a successful tour organizer/leader, beloved by all. Most of the other characters are only two-dimensional. Don't tell us about the character, show us via dialog and actions, please.